Wednesday, October 27, 2010

Warm Up

My topic for my article is on the Homecoming floats that are preformed at half time of the Homecoming game. My picture is going to be of the Senor float and the people working on it as well.

Friday, October 22, 2010

Warm Up

    My most challenging thing about online Journalism has to be maybe the pace, because of all the other homework you have to do plus having to write an essay is kind of hard. But, soon like in the middle of the year I think I will get familiar with the pace and it won't be a problem anymore. Also, the interviews are kind of challenging trying to interview all the people you must interview and fitting them in to your schedule and theirs.

Wednesday, October 20, 2010

Warm Up: Pre writing

  
   The prewriting was helpful to me in many ways but I would preform my prewriting technique instead. Some times I felt like I was repeating my self a lot and not breaking it down to what I'm going to write about in each paragraph. It was still helpful when sometimes I thought of a new idea and then backed it up with a lot of information. When I did that all that I had to do was put it all together and make it flow and now I have a paragraph. It was easy and helpful in a lot of ways , but I don't think that I would want to use the pre sheet for everyone of my essays. Instead I like to draw on a piece of paper 5 boxes which symbolizes each paragraph. In each box I summarize what I would write about and talk about in that section. Then, at the end sum it all up and I'm ready to go.

Tuesday, October 19, 2010

Warm Up

When I am bored I usually tend to grave a lap top and go onto National Geographic website and look at all the neat pictures.They have pictures on nature, weather, people, and just so much more. Also, I like to go to the website FML.com where people anonymously post funny things that happened through out their day. I really enjoy Face book but I mean who doesn't.  That is pretty much it.

Thursday, October 14, 2010

What were the three most valuable things Joe shared today?

   I think that the 1st most valuable thing that he told us was the advise for our web. Joe has been taking web classes and told use that you should always plan things out for our web. The 2nd most valuable thing that he said was kind of preparing us for the real world of Journalism. He informed us that every day there is always a new article on the website so prepare for a lot of work. Lastly, he informed us about himself and what jobs he is doing. That helped me get an outlook on him and what kind of things he likes to do. Also how he got to the point that he is at today.

Tuesday, October 12, 2010

Warrm Up

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   Under normal circumstances  I would have taken a car, but the car sits in my garage broken . I had to get to Mary's house no matter what, she says that it is very important for me to see her. My curiosity on what she has to tell me lead me to walking in the forest , lost.The sudden burst of shivers that go run down my back only make this walk even worse. I can't find which way to go and as minutes pass I know that I need to find my way out of these forests. The paper said go left I did so, then take a right I did so as well. I followed all the direction and I still do not see Mary's house in sight, even so no house at all. Lost with no one should I hug a tree wait for someone to find me stranded here? Next, time I will take the high rode.

Wednesday, October 6, 2010

Warm Up

My piece to me is not really what represents me as a writer because it's not the type of writing that I am best at. To me I think that I am a much better fictional and creative writer and I think that is more what represents me.I enjoy writing very creative pieces.  I still think that my piece is good and that it does show how I am as a writer.

Monday, October 4, 2010

I am going to be ready

 Yes, I think I will be ready to go by Friday. Everything is already written I just have to fix a few corrections then I will be ready. I also need just a little teacher advise touch ups if there is any necessary.

Friday, October 1, 2010

Warm Up

In my gmail I got comments from my editor and she caught things that I would never have caught. i was surprised with ever comment but I was great full. Ever comment and ever note told me how to make my essay better. I really enjoy having my essay proof read and edited by someone else.